Vanzetti ([info]vaznetti) wrote in [info]supernatural100,

Challenge 27: Failures

Title: Contradiction
Author: Vanzetti ([info]vaznetti)
Rating: All audiences
Category: John, gen, pre-series.


"The boys are learning what they need to know," John says. He's not used to contradiction.

Jim's come all the way to Iowa to argue with him, though, and he's a stubborn man. "How to fight? This is the third school Dean's been kicked out of."

"He didn't start it -- three against one and the other boys were seniors."

"The other boys didn't stand a chance," Jim says. It's true; Dean told him, half-proud and half-sulky, and John didn't know whether to be proud or ashamed either, because that's his teaching, right there. Who cares if Dean flunks history?

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Tags: challenge #027-failure

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[info]halfshellvenus

June 25 2006, 05:57:00 UTC 5 years ago

I liked this one-- you did as I did in some of mine, twisting one person's idea of failure into another person's idea of something good/unimportant/neutral.

Dean told him, half-proud and half-sulky, and John didn't know whether to be proud or ashamed either, because that's his teaching, right there.
I loved this line in particular. And the implication that John's teaching wasn't just how to fight, but Dean's attitude about the whole incident as well.

[info]vaznetti

June 25 2006, 09:28:19 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks! And yes, that's what I was trying for. There's what John thinks and what Jim thinks, and what Dean and his teachers think, and maybe none of these quite add up with what I think or with each other.

And I think John molds Dean's attitudes, probably more than he realizes.

[info]numerousaspects

June 18 2008, 08:20:56 UTC 3 years ago

Very cleverly done =] like the fact that three seniors satnd no chance against Dean - very in character!

[info]vaznetti

June 22 2008, 21:15:40 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked that touch.
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